Summer projects started!

This summer's projects you may recall included making music. Well, I've started! Today I worked for a while on a song that I just could *not* get right, so I quit and instead started working on "Brown Eyed Girl" (Van Morrison) and it came out quite well.

( My criticisms - cut-tagged so you can read AFTER you listen )

Maybe for my next song I'll work on vocals only - there's some rounds I can do a capella that I think could sound really nice.