Dec. 13th, 2006

So this policeman's had the charge of killing a teen who stole a Playstation accidentally dismissed. Yes, my grammar's horrible and makes the situation hard to understand. The article's worse. (Ugh, and every single sentence is a separate paragraph! No wonder our students can't write.)

Now that you're done reading it, here's my re-write. )
"It all began innocently enough when a visitor to an Apple forum posted a picture of his cat, Frankie, contemplating the beauty of a flower. Shortly afterwards another user posted a picture of his cat bristling at the image of Frankie on the monitor. I decided this was too much fun and advanced the concept as The Infinite Cat Project which is, simply, cats regarding cats regarding cats in an electronic milieu."

Start here

Damn you, [livejournal.com profile] sclerotic_rings!

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