The most confusing reporting ev4r!
Dec. 13th, 2006 12:51 amSo this policeman's had the charge of killing a teen who stole a Playstation accidentally dismissed. Yes, my grammar's horrible and makes the situation hard to understand. The article's worse. (Ugh, and every single sentence is a separate paragraph! No wonder our students can't write.)
( Now that you're done reading it, here's my re-write. )
( Now that you're done reading it, here's my re-write. )